Bar Chart

The charts show the proportion of holidaymakers of one region staying in different types of accommodation in three different years.

Bar chart for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Holiday Accommodation Choices.
Write this task

2 Corrections

Band

  1. Band 7.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.0

    The pie charts outline the percentages of holidaymakers from a particular region in terms of their preference of accommodation over a span of four decades, starting from 1965. It is noticeable that people shifted their tendency to stay at a friend or relative’s house in favour of staying in a hotel.

    View annotated correction
  2. Band 6.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 6.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    The pie charts compare the ratio of holidaymakers from a region who used different types of lodging in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Overall, the hotel became the primary type of accommodation for the majority of the travellers in 1985 and 2005 despite most of the people’s preference to stay with a friend or relative.

    View annotated correction