Bar Chart

The chart below shows the type of transports young people in four countries prefer to use.

Bar chart for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Young People's Transport Preferences.
Write this task

2 Corrections

Band

  1. Band 6.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The column graph outlines the transportation preference among the young people in Great Britain, USA, Germany and France. As an overall trend, the young generation, except in Germany, mainly like to use the car as a mean of commuting and this ratio is the highest in France.

    View annotated correction
  2. Band 6.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 6.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    The bar graph outlines the types of transportation the young generation in Grain Britain, USA, Germany and France prefer to use to commute. Overall, automobiles are the most preferred vehicles for commuting in these countries among the youths except for Germany where the highest proportion of youths prefer to travel by their bicycles.

    View annotated correction
Academic Task 1 · Bar charts
Bar chart for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Factors Affecting Work Performance.
Write this task Compare 4 sample answers