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Many parents use punishment to teach the difference between right and wrong to kids. Many people think that the punishment is necessary to help children learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree to punish a kid to teach him/ her something important? What kind of punishment do you think parents and teachers can use?

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  1. Band 6.5
    Task Response
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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Teaching children to differentiate between the right and the wrong is an important and critical job for parents. There is one school of thought that believes that children can learn to distinguish between good and bad when they are subjected to punishment.

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  2. Band 6.5
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    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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    Teaching children to differentiate between the right and the wrong is an important and critical job for parents. There is one school of thought that believes that children can learn to distinguish between good and bad when they are subjected to punishment.

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  3. Band 6.5
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    Band 7.0
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    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
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    Band 5.5

    Parenting is a very difficult challenge all around the world. Most of the parents consider punishment a better teaching method instead of listening and communicating with the children.

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