Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation. Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
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In this contemporary era, youngsters are dominating their respective families and societies as they are unknowingly provided with extreme power and authority. There are various reasons for this change which ultimately impact their bonding with adults and senior citizens.
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Nowadays, modernisation defines how technology can be a powerful tool and this has changed the way young people used to perceive their position in a society. The young group are far more motivated by the technological transformation, thus giving them the power over the past young generations.
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Irrespective of nationality, location or religion, back in time, the old ones were considered the base of the society. No doubt, nowadays, the roles have exchanged, with the young people becoming more and more powerful and influential.