Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms or sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Different employers hold varying views regarding whether providing their employees with subsidized memberships to gymnasiums or sports centres will have a favourable effect on the health and general work performance of their staff. In this essay, I will discuss both views.