Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.

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It is true that the numbers of large malls have increased rapidly in the past few years, and many people believe that they are replacing the traditional shops. I personally feel that there should be some clear regulations about the design of malls in each city; therefore the existence of these shopping malls will not replace the small shops.

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This is a true fact to consider that the present world has become a global village. Therefore, people are motivated to buy their necessities from the competitive market.

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Large supermarkets are gaining popularity in many countries. Some people argue that small local businesses are finding it extremely difficult to survive in the midst of swift growth and development of supermarkets and that the local communities would die out as the local businesses shut down.