One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The global population will be eight billion soon, a staggeringly high number than the ideal population that the world can support, and advanced medical care has, on top of that, increased people's life expectancy, making the situation graver than ever before.

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The advancements in medical care have led to a significant increase in life expectancy, and clearly, this phenomenon has both positive and negative aspects. I firmly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and this essay explains why.

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With the advancement of medical care, people are now living longer than ever before. The increased life expectancy comes with its advantages and disadvantages.

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This era is sanctified with comprehensive medical care, and the lifespan of people has enhanced and still increasing through modern medicines and treatments. I believe the result has blessed human civilisation and the disadvantages of increasing life expectancy are overshadowed by its advantages.