Societies benefit from the closer relationship we have with foreigners through international tourism and business. To what extent do your agree or disagree?

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 5.5

Lexical Resource

Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

Since the dawn of time people around the world develop a closer relationship not only to their own country but also internationally. This is because of the growing tourism industry internationally and the business dealings each country has.

Task Response

Band 6.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

A society is an amalgamation of different people with different cultures. The impact on a society depends on the influence of various people with different cultures.

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.0

Some people believe that people have many advantages from international business and tourism. However, I totally disagree with this opinion and firmly believe that people have much more disadvantages than advantages from the international relationship with different countries.

Task Response

Band 6.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.5

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

International tourism and business play a very crucial role throughout the world. It is clearly seen that countries are beneficial to each other through the sound relationships.