The graph shows a comparison in the pulse rate changes between two different individuals of different ages and professions.
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The line graph compares the pulse rate changes of two individuals, Mabel and Albert. In particular, physical exercise escalates the heart beats of two individuals of different ages and professions differently.
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The line graph compares the heart beats of two individuals – Mabel, a 36 years old office worker, and Albert, a 26 years old former college athlete, during their four minute exercise period. Overall, office worker’s heart beat rate was lower before starting the exercise but in third and final minutes, his pulse rate was recorded higher.