The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
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The given table shows data on households consumer items owned by British during the period of 11 years commencing from 1972. It is clearly visible that the percentage of households who owned consumer durables had seen a significant hike during this period.
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The table data shows the percentage of British households which owned a range of consumer durables between 1972 and 1983. Overall, the ratio of British families owning those household appliances steadily increased between 1972 and 1983, and television was the most common household electronic items during this period while telephone ownership increased steadily.