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The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

雅思学术类 Task 1 图表，主题为 Music Album Purchases by Age and Sex。
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    The three provided graphs represent data on the type of music albums purchased by the different age groups in Britain. As is observed, Rock is most popular music type among the three music categories and people purchasing classical music album are mostly over 45 years and male listeners purchased more album than that of females.

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    The given charts enumerate the percentage of pop, rock and classical music album purchasers based on their sex and age group in Britain. As a general trend, men were dominant music album purchasers in every kind of music genre.

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