首页雅思学术类 Task 1 范文Industrial Groundwater and Public Water Use

The graph below shows usual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in some countries in a year.

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The provided bar graph compares the average ground and supply water consumptions in seven different industries in several countries in a year. In general, those industries use more groundwater than supply water and the chemical industry is the highest water consumer.
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The presented bar graph demonstrates the average use of water by industries in several countries every year. In general, the highest water usages could be seen in chemical industries while fuel industries spend the least water supply.
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