Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Sample Response
Currently, there is considerable debatethere are huge debates about the main purpose of educational institutions, such aseducational institutions; such as whether their task should betheir task should be to prepare students with knowledge and expertise for employer needs or provideprove graduates with access to the material for their own analysisanalysing. This essay will examine both sides of the argument and will highlight the most important task of universities. There is no doubt that graduates must be prepared to go to workgo to the work with knowledge and skills in the fieldhaving the knowledge and skills of the field where they plan to start work. These will improve the quality of graduates’ work and give a good impression to the employer. Also, businesses will benefitbusiness will be benefitted from their new employees and will allow an organisationwill allow to an organisation to survive in the rapidly developing business environment. For example, it is highly important to have the necessary knowledge to work as an accountant, otherwise a person would not knowotherwise, a person would not know what to do, how to perform the tasks according to standards that auditors will later checkwith requirements which later will be checked by auditors. If the work was not done without necessary accuracy, the company will face many problems with the government and tax officers. Therefore, I firmly believe that it is highly important for universities to teach their students the knowledge and skills, which are essential to the business. Despite these arguments, there is also a case for advocating that the main task of universities is to provide accessprovide an access to the materials and forother resources their students for their own learning and analysing. Indeed, I believe the access is extremely important, however, without teaching how to use these materials appropriatelyhow appropriate to use these materials most of the students cannot do it in a proper way required by the employer. For instance, there are a lot of different examples of preparing financial statements, the way theyits look and only expert can say in which particular situations could be prepared, analysed and be used this way of preparation of financial statement or a different one as well as in what kind of area could be used. Having considered both sides of the issue, I would argue that although universities should provide an access to knowledge for their students, educational institutions should teach how to use, learn and analyse them.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response presents a clear preference for workplace preparation and supports it with a relevant accounting example. However, the case for knowledge pursued for its own sake is only briefly considered, while the absence of paragraphing and frequent errors in long sentences sometimes blur the argument. Develop the opposing view more fully, then organise each view and the final position in separate paragraphs using shorter, more accurate sentences.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The essay addresses both views and gives an opinion that workplace preparation should be the main function, but the second view is less clearly developed.
Explain the value of knowledge for its own sake before rejecting it or limiting it.
Coherence and Cohesion
The response has a clear overall direction, but paragraphing is absent and several long sentences weaken progression.
Use separate paragraphs for the two views and the final opinion, with one main point in each paragraph.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is relevant to education and employment, but there are inaccurate word choices and repeated phrases around access, materials, and business needs.
Use academic terms such as employability, independent inquiry, theoretical knowledge, practical training, and labour market.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Frequent article, passive, and clause errors affect clarity, especially in long sentences.
Shorten complex sentences and check passive forms, articles, and relative clauses.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
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