The best way to provide enough homes in large cities is to build tall apartment blocks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Mang people nowadays tend to decline the unneccssary spend, saving their money for the possible future use. I fully agree with this action, because it not only introduces an awareness of economical life to children, but also helps people prepare for the possible demand about money in the future.
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It is argued that constructing tall apartments is the best possible solution to mitigate the housing problems in large urban areas. I completely agree with this idea because it can save a lot of space and help the city to attract tourists.
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As the population of large cities continues to increase, providing enough housing has become a major challenge. I partly agree that building tall apartment blocks is an effective solution.
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All things considered that to ensure citizens of homes, the buiding of the high-rises by far great idea. As I see it this way providing cities with flat blocks have many advantages.
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It is often argued that high-rise apartment buildings are the most effective solution to the shortage of housing in major cities. Although tall blocks can accommodate a large number of residents on limited land, I only partly agree because they should be combined with other forms of development.
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Many large cities are facing a serious housing shortage, and tall apartment blocks are often presented as the main answer. Although high-rise buildings can provide homes for many people, I only partly agree that they are the best solution.
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As populations in major cities rise, finding sufficient housing has become increasingly difficult. Although high-rise apartment buildings are an important part of the solution, I disagree that they are the best answer on their own.