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Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes, and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?

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    Generally, people read newspapers to find out about world current affairs and they read magazines to be entertained. Therefore, one would expect to find articles that feature the private lives of famous people in magazines rather than newspapers.

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    It is true that articles published in the print media include private life information of celebrities. Sometimes intricate details of their personal lives are covered on regular basis such as food, shopping, and partners etcetera.

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