The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
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The given bar graph represents data on the children’s leisure activities in Australia. As is presented in the graph, both boys and girls from five to fourteen years old prefer to watch video or TV, ride a bike and play computer games in their leisure time.
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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- Lexical Resource
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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The bar graph gives information about the leisure activities of Australian children between the age of 5 - 14 years. At a first glance it is noticeable that irrespective of sex, Australian kids like to watch TV or videos.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
The bar chart illustrates how Australian children, between 5 and 14, spend their free time. Their leisure activities are categorised into five different pursuits (Skateboarding, Bike riding, Watching TV, Computer games, and Art), and compared by the participation of boys and girls.