Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Task Response

Band 8.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7.0

Lexical Resource

Band 8.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 8.0

I believe that child-rearing should be the responsibility of both parents and that, whilst the roles within that partnership may be different, they are nevertheless equal in importance. In some societies, it has been made easier over the years for single parents to raise children on their own.

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

We live in a modern era where equality is being promoted everywhere including in workplaces, society and even families. This is why child-rearing should be a responsibility that is shared by both parents.

Task Response

Band 6.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

Traditionally women take the responsibility of nurturing and upbringing children in a family and that can be connected with many factors such as rules and stereotypes in our society.

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 5.5

Lexical Resource

Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.0

In today's society, both parents play's an equal role in the family life to bring up the children. It is important to share their responsibilities equally to make their child as a good citizen of tomorrow.

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

For nine to ten months, a woman endures the drastic physiological and emotional changes that pregnancy brings about. Because of this, a woman has the greatest right to decide on whether she will have a child or not.

Task Response

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 5.0

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

In the past, it was a common custom that the one who was responsible for the upbringing of children - was the mother only; the fathers' responsibility was to earn the livings and provide a good life. However, a change in the belief took place in the previous few years; nowadays, some people claim that fatherhood should be emphasised much more.

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 5.5

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.0

In modern societies, women have actively entered into the labour market and in many sectors, their number have even exceeded the number of men employees. Due to this fact, the roles of the two genders as parents have been modified and quite often is raised the issue whether both parents should be equally responsible for bringing up their children.