Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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While some individuals argue that extinction of certain species of plants and animals has become the main environmental issue in this era, others believe other environmental problems are more worthy of being concerned. In my opinion, climate change is a much more important issue since it is the root cause of various problems including extinction of species.

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The issue of environmental problems has become a pressing concern in modern times. While some argue that the loss of some particular species of plants and animals is the main environmental problem, others contend that there are more critical issues that demand immediate attention and action.

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Many are of the opinion that the risks for endangered plants and wildlife are the most severe consequences of our worsening environment while others would argue that other problems are more pressing. While I consider the impact of recurring natural disasters to be important, in my opinion the loss of wildlife is the most serious threat to the environment.

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Some individuals argue that the primary environmental concern today is the extinction of certain plant and animal species. Others, however, believe that broader environmental issues, such as climate change and pollution, pose even greater threats.