Some people say that rich nations should help poor countries with their basic needs like food and education while others oppose the idea and argue that the poor nation themselves should try to improve their condition. Do you agree with the idea that rich and developed nations should help the poor nations? Write no less than 250 words.

Task Response

Band 7.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.5

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Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

Today’s world is divided into industrialised and developing countries, where the main difference between them is the amount of money they spend on the healthcare system, education and infrastructures. Most citizens in developing nations live under the poverty line and, in my opinion, rich countries have the ability and should take up the responsibility of supporting them.

Task Response

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

After reckoning enough, I believe that rich or developed nations should share their wealth and resources with those inferior or poorer nations who are starveling and struggling with their system, because there will be a certain hard time which comes to everyone, so for the sake of humanity, such aid should be provided.