People succeed because of their hard work; luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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It is believed that people will achieve their goals and have a successful career if they work hard, and luck has no effect on it. To a certain point, I would agree that some people are succeeded due to their diligent and hard working cultures, but I do believe that luck also plays an important part in people's life.
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There has been a debate whether or not luck plays a part in success. Some people argued that hard work is the only thing that helps people to succeed, whereas others think that luck also contributes to success.
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Success is the ultimate goal of everyone. All of us are doing our best to achieve success in different fields of life as work and study.
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Many people think that to be successful someone should rely on working hard and luck has no role in success. I completely disagree with this notion that success only depends on hard work.
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"Success is always a journey but not a destination". I feel that success cannot be a place but it is a part and journey of one's own life.
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Every person wants to be successful in life. They have been trying their best, studying or working hard to reach what they wish for.
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At the present time, people believe that only hardworking people will succeed and there's no place for luck. I totally disagree with the rubric above due to the fact that people cannot earn money without luck and with no luck people won't be able to get a job and it will be proven in the following essay.
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Many people are successful in life, which can be explained not only by their hard work. In this essay, I am going to consider that luck is as important as the ability to dedicate our time and energy to work.