You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: - explain why you took the job - describe the problems that you experienced - suggest what could be done about them
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- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.5
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Dear Mr Lim, I have been working with your company for almost five weeks as a part-time call centre agent. I am writing this letter to raise my concerns regarding some of the problems that I encountered during my work at your company.
- Band 6.5Xem bài chấm chi tiết →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
Dear Mr Anderson, I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity to work in your company as a part-time cost-benefit analyst. So far I have been enjoying my work but some issues have been raised that need your interference to resolve.