You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: - explain why you took the job - describe the problems that you experienced - suggest what could be done about them
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- Task Achievement
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- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.5
Dear Mr Lechner, I have been working as a part-time fitness instructor at your gym for the last four months. I am gratified to be offered the job, not only because I need to earn some extra money to cover my living expenses but also because I want to enhance my experience in fitness training.
- Band 7.5Xem bài chấm chi tiết →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 8.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.0
Dear Mr Patrick, I am working as a part-time computer operator in your office for the last six weeks. I took the job to fund my internship in a software programming course.