You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: - explain why you took the job - describe the problems that you experienced - suggest what could be done about them

Task Achievement

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.0

Dear Mr Karim, I am writing to raise my concern about some specific problems with respect to my current job. I have been doing a part-time job as a Software Architect in your company for the last two months and have two specific problems which impeded me to work properly.

Task Achievement

Band 8.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7.5

Lexical Resource

Band 7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 7.5

Dear Mr Lechner, I have been working as a part-time fitness instructor at your gym for the last four months. I am gratified to be offered the job, not only because I need to earn some extra money to cover my living expenses but also because I want to enhance my experience in fitness training.

Task Achievement

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

Dear Mrs Fischer, I am a part-time Financial Assistant in your office and I joined here almost three months ago. I am honoured to be considered a deserving employee in your reputed organisation.

Task Achievement

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.0

Dear Mr Lim, I have been working with your company for almost five weeks as a part-time call centre agent. I am writing this letter to raise my concerns regarding some of the problems that I encountered during my work at your company.

Task Achievement

Band 7.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.5

Lexical Resource

Band 7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

Dear Mrs Jeeni: I have joined your company as a part-time employee a few weeks ago and I am indebted for the opportunity you have bestowed on me. I took the job to finish my internship - which is a requirement to complete my Bachelor degree.

Task Achievement

Band 7.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7.0

Lexical Resource

Band 7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

Dear Mr Johnson, I am writing to you regarding a few issues related to the job I have taken in your company. I decided to take the job in order to gain some practical experience as a law student but I am afraid some problems deter me to work properly, which is affecting me personally.

Task Achievement

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

Dear Mr Anderson, I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity to work in your company as a part-time cost-benefit analyst. So far I have been enjoying my work but some issues have been raised that need your interference to resolve.

Task Achievement

Band 8.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 8.0

Lexical Resource

Band 7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 7.0

Dear Mr Patrick, I am working as a part-time computer operator in your office for the last six weeks. I took the job to fund my internship in a software programming course.

Task Achievement

Band 8.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7.0

Lexical Resource

Band 7.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

Dear Mr Harris, I am a part-time call centre operator at your company, started working about 4 weeks ago. I am writing to indicate some of the problems I encountered during my work.