People succeed because of their hard work; luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Task Response

Band 4.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 4.0

Lexical Resource

Band 5.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 4.5

It is believed that people will achieve their goals and have a successful career if they work hard, and luck has no effect on it. To a certain point, I would agree that some people are succeeded due to their diligent and hard working cultures, but I do believe that luck also plays an important part in people's life.

Task Response

Band 7.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 6.5

There has been a debate whether or not luck plays a part in success. Some people argued that hard work is the only thing that helps people to succeed, whereas others think that luck also contributes to success.

Task Response

Band 6.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 5.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

Success is the ultimate goal of everyone. All of us are doing our best to achieve success in different fields of life as work and study.

Task Response

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

Many people think that to be successful someone should rely on working hard and luck has no role in success. I completely disagree with this notion that success only depends on hard work.

Task Response

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

"Success is always a journey but not a destination". I feel that success cannot be a place but it is a part and journey of one's own life.

Task Response

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 5.5

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

Every person wants to be successful in life. They have been trying their best, studying or working hard to reach what they wish for.

Task Response

Band 5.5

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 5.5

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

At the present time, people believe that only hardworking people will succeed and there's no place for luck. I totally disagree with the rubric above due to the fact that people cannot earn money without luck and with no luck people won't be able to get a job and it will be proven in the following essay.