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The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.

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    The data presented in the table outlines how much leisure time people from different age groups spend yearly in Someland. It is obvious that watching TV is a popular form of free-time activity for Somelanders.

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    The table shows how people in different age groups spend their leisure time in Someland over the course of a year. Overall, the amount of leisure time available varies considerably across the age groups and people of different age levels have very different ways of spending their leisure time.

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    The table shows data on the leisure activities of people from different age groups in a year in Someland. Generally speaking, watching TV and videos is the most preferred free time activity for people of all age groups while time spent yearly on other leisure activities vary based on people’s age.

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