Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.
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The two illustrations show the previous and the latest plans for a health centre in 2005 and in the present day. In 2005, the main entrance was located in front of the health centre with 12 car parking spaces outside.
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The illustration compares that arrangement of the health centre's rooms and facilities in 2005 and in the present day. It can be observed that the health centre has been renovated and it has more rooms and less space for garden these days compared to that of 2005.
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The plans illustrate the development of a health centre from 2005 to the present day. Overall, it is clear that some major changes have been taken place to the health centre.
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The plans, A and B, illustrate the refurbishment of a health centre in two different years (2005 and the present). Overall, there have been massive changes in the health centre over the period given.