Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sample Response
In modern worldtoday’s modern world, we are constantly confronted with the issue of environmental problems which are becoming more severe, according to news reportsbecoming more severe nowadays in the newspaper. Some people are of the opinion that individuals can hardly make a differencechange to environmental problems, while some believe that governments can help solve environmental issueshelp in solving environmental issues. I strongly agree that governments do play an indispensable role in tackling these problems. Some people think that environmental problems are not easythe environmental problems are not an easy task for individuals to deal with, but in fact, we can adopt some good habitsactually take up some good habits which could prove useful in dealing with environmental problems. For example, we can always bring reusable bagsbring along recycle bags with us so that we can reduce the use of plastic bagscut down the usage of plastic bags. It can be clearly seen that individuals can actually contribute to helping reduce environmental issues as fewer plastic bags being used means that less air pollution which is caused by the burning of plastic bags in the rubbish dump sites. It is certainly true that environmental problems cannot be solved without the help of governments. To begin with,To begin, governments have more power than individuals in coping withthe environmental problems. They can, for instance, introduce lawsset up laws that ban the emission of wastewastes from factoriesfactory directly into the air and watercourses. As a consequence, less air and water pollutionless air pollution and water pollution improve citizens' healthguarantee the good health of citizens. By doing this, citizens will be healthier and they can now live in a pollution-free country. In conclusion, environmental problems should be tackled immediately with cooperation between individuals and governmentsthe cooperation of individuals and governments. I believe that these environmental problems can eventually be addressedthe environmental problems will be solved one day and our country will continue to prosperprosper and flourish in the years to come.
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response’s clearest strength is its relevant use of examples showing how both citizens and governments can contribute to environmental protection. However, it only partially examines the two stated views and the opinion shifts from emphasizing government leadership to general cooperation without fully reconciling these positions. The priority is to analyse each claim directly and sustain one precise position through the introduction, body, and conclusion.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The response addresses individual and government action with relevant examples, but it does not fully discuss the precise logic of both stated views and its position is only partly consistent.
Explain why problems may exceed individual capacity and why government action depends on individuals, then make the relationship between these views and your opinion explicit.
Coherence and Cohesion
The argument follows a broadly clear sequence and uses cohesive devices effectively, though paragraphing is absent and some links are repetitive or mechanical.
Separate the introduction, each main view, and the conclusion into clear paragraphs with more precise transitions between claims.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is adequate for the topic and includes some less common expressions, but repetition and several awkward collocations limit precision.
Replace repeated references to environmental problems with precise terms and correct combinations such as reusable bags, waste emissions, and dealing with pollution.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The response uses both simple and complex sentences, but recurring errors with articles, prepositions, agreement, and clause construction reduce accuracy.
Edit each complex sentence for complete clause structure and accurate noun phrases, especially after causal linkers such as as and means that.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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