Some people believe that it is a good idea to continue to work at their old age. Do you agree or disagree?
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As the average lifespan is growing longer across the globe, some people are seeking rearrangement of lives and consider working at an old age as a good choice. From my perspective, such idea, if put into practice, is harmful to both themselves and the whole society, despite few benefits it may bring.
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As the average lifespan is growing longer across the globe, some people are seeking rearrangement of lives and consider working at an old age as a good choice. From my perspective, such idea, if put into practice, is harmful to both themselves and the whole society, despite few benefits it may bring.
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As the average lifespan is growing longer arcoss the globe, some people are seeking rearrangement of lives and consider wroking at an old age as a good choice. From my perspective, such idea, if put into practice, is harmful to both themselves and the whole society, despite few benefits it may bring.
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The idea that people should keep working when they get old has become a matter of debate. I disagree with the idea that continuing to work at an old age is beneficial because it not only affects old people’s health and living quality, but also reduces the job opportunities for the younger ones.