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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    It is sometimes asserted that life in a major urban areas is detrimental to citizens’ well-being. I largely agree with this assertion given the air pollution and fast pace of life that they have to endure even though medical advancements might be more approachable in metropolises.

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    It is perceived by many that metropolitan cities are ominous for our well-being as opposed to living in rural areas. While the former offers a hectic lifestyle and have much more pollution, the latter grants a tranquil and favourable environment for our physical and psychological benefits.

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