The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at west park Secondary school since its construction in 1950.
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The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
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The given pictures illustrate the various developments of West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010. Overall, it is clear that the main road remained in place over the given period of time and It is also apparent that the school was developed and increased in size while areas of the sports field and playground decreased.
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The diagram illustrates how West Park Secondary School has transformed over a period of 60 years since its establishment in 1950. Overall, it can be seen that the school had undergone some significant changes throughout the period with the expansion of the school building, as well as the addition of a sports field and car park.
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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.
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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
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