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The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

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    The diagrams illustrate how West Park Secondary School has developed during the period of 60 years since it was first built in 1950. Overall, the school area has been expanded and a car parking area consumed a great deal of space over time while the farmland was converted into a small sports field.

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    The diagram illustrates how West Park Secondary School has transformed over a period of 60 years since its establishment in 1950. Overall, it can be seen that the school had undergone some significant changes throughout the period with the expansion of the school building, as well as the addition of a sports field and car park.

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