In modern cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbor and never feel a sense of community. What are the causes of this situation? How can we change it?
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In an era when a growing proportion of the population lives in urban regions, the phenomenon that residents tend to be unfamiliar with their neighbors and lack a sense of community and belonging has sparked an intense debate. From my perspective, the prevalence of the Internet and urbanization trends may contribute to this phenomenon.
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Nowadays, many city people do not know their neighbours and lack a close community feeling. This is very common in daily life.
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In an era when a growing proportion of the population lives in urban regions, the phenomenon that residents tend to be unfamiliar with their neighbors and lack a sense of community and belonging has sparked an intense debate. From my perspective, the prevalence of the Internet and urbanization trends may contribute to this phenomenon.
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In an era when a growing proportion of population lives in urban regions, the phenomenon that residents tend to be unfamiliar with their neighbors and lack a sense of community and belonging has sparked an intense debate. From my perspective, the prevalence of the Internet and urbanization trends may contribute to this phenomenon.
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In an era when a mounting number of population lives in urban regions, the phenomenon that residents tend to be unfamiliar with their neighbors and lack a sense of community and belongings has sparked an intense debate. From my perspective, the prevalence of the Internet and urbanization trends may contribute to this phenomenon.