Opinion

Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Band

  1. Band 6.0
    Task Response
    Band 6.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    It is in favour of the company to inspire the old employees to retire who are still working at higher positions at the age of 55. That will benefit the company as well as the employee.

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  2. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Nowadays the discussion about whether the businesses are supposed to prescribe the retirement age at fifty-five to offer more job vacancies for younger generation has become a controversy. Some believe that is a perfect attempt to support the young, others claim that this is not the case.

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