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Process Diagram

The diagram below shows how one type of desert, known as a rain-shadow desert, is formed.

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    The diagram illustrates the process by which a rain-shadow desert is created on the inland side of a mountain range. Overall, moist winds from the sea rise over mountains and lose their moisture as rain on the windward side.

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    Band 8.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 8.0

    The diagram illustrates the process by which a rain-shadow desert is created on the inland side of a mountain range. Overall, the mountains cause wet air from the sea to rise, cool and produce rain on the windward side.

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    Band 7.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 8.0

    The diagram shows the process by which a rain-shadow desert is created near a mountain range. Overall, air coming from the sea loses most of its moisture on the windward side of the mountains.

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