In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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Currently, the world is experiencing economic development, in some countries more people are becoming overweight, and their health level is reducing. This situation lead to many health problems such as lung, heart and blood disease.

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Remarkably, the proportion of overweight and obese has increased lately all around the world. With a diminution in the exercises and physical rigour, the overall health index of certain countries has been setting new nadir.

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Over the last ten years, there are increasing numbers of overweight people around the world and at the same time, unfortunately, people do less exercise and have more health problems. Indeed, it is not a surprise that the number of fast food restaurants has increased and people have started to be busy and some of them lazy.

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Obesity is progressing worldwide and the number of overweight population is increasing in many countries. Moreover, physical fitness and health status is deteriorating.

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In recent years, there is an increasing trend of obesity among individuals. Overweight is creating several health and fitness related problems.

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According to a study, the average weight of people is increasing in few countries, which is, in turn, reducing their stamina and immunity levels. Overweight is always a problem and overweight causes numerous diseases and reduces the fitness.